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I like your story Mase and the illustrations you created to go with them. Well done. Maybe next time you could try to add a little more detail and description to paint a better picture in the reader's mind :)
I like your story Mase and the illustrations you created to go with them. Well done. Maybe next time you could try to add a little more detail and description to paint a better picture in the reader's mind :)
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