You have presented your writing well and have some great points in here. Next time think about your structure, you don't need to have time linking words or number your paragraphs :)
hi it is Emma I agree for you and last term we were learning and we have been learning about plastic and there are five garbage patches in the ocean and I do not think it is that good so lets make a change in the world together. Cheers Emma!
You have presented your writing well and have some great points in here. Next time think about your structure, you don't need to have time linking words or number your paragraphs :)
ReplyDeletehi it is Emma I agree for you and last term we were learning and we have been learning about plastic and there are five garbage patches in the ocean and I do not think it is that good so lets make a change in the world together.
ReplyDeleteCheers Emma!
Good job on your work i really like it.
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